Post by christina on May 20, 2007 9:19:47 GMT -5
Basics:
Name: Christina Harvelle
Age/Grade: (A freshman would be great!) 15 freshmen
Model: (You can use an adult actor/muscian, etc for this, just make some adjustments in the following categories if need be.) Alona Tal
Build:
Hair (style, color): shoulder length blonde
Eye Color: Brown
Height: 5’4”
Skin Tone: Peaches and Cream
Personal:
Personality: She is a quiet reserved girl when she first meets someone but when she warms up to them she really likes to be around them. She is out going and friendly once warmed up to someone. She is a sweet and caring girl to.
Likes: Friends, Music, Art, Dance, Reading
Dislikes: Jocks, Cheerleaders, Bullies, talking in front of people,
Family/Guardians: She is in foster care her mother is in prison and she doesn’t know her dad.
Sexual Orientation (unsure is an option): Lesbian
School Related:
Favorite Class: Music
Least Favorite Class: Gym
Clique: (Just to give us an idea where you character fits in or doesn't) She doesn’t she’s to quiet to fit in with a certain set group.
Sports:None
Clubs: Theater (if it counts as a club) and Art
Other: She was raped by the jocks at her old school. She just moved to this school and will have troubles trusting guys especially jocks. It also left her pregnant but she is only three months along so she hasn’t told anyone yet.
Code:Notebook
RP Sample (at least 5 sentences): Christina walked into the school, she felt like she was going to be sick. She was scared at that was bothering her so was her stomach. She wasn’t in the mood for this today hell she just wanted to spend another day on her foster mom’s bathroom floor trying not to throw up. She was fifteen, pregnant, in foster care, at a new school, and she didn’t know anyone.
“Well Chrissy” said Christina to herself “Here goes nothing”
She swallowed hard trying to keep down her breakfast. She didn’t want to make a fool of herself on her first day.
Name: Christina Harvelle
Age/Grade: (A freshman would be great!) 15 freshmen
Model: (You can use an adult actor/muscian, etc for this, just make some adjustments in the following categories if need be.) Alona Tal
Build:
Hair (style, color): shoulder length blonde
Eye Color: Brown
Height: 5’4”
Skin Tone: Peaches and Cream
Personal:
Personality: She is a quiet reserved girl when she first meets someone but when she warms up to them she really likes to be around them. She is out going and friendly once warmed up to someone. She is a sweet and caring girl to.
Likes: Friends, Music, Art, Dance, Reading
Dislikes: Jocks, Cheerleaders, Bullies, talking in front of people,
Family/Guardians: She is in foster care her mother is in prison and she doesn’t know her dad.
Sexual Orientation (unsure is an option): Lesbian
School Related:
Favorite Class: Music
Least Favorite Class: Gym
Clique
Sports:None
Clubs: Theater (if it counts as a club) and Art
Other: She was raped by the jocks at her old school. She just moved to this school and will have troubles trusting guys especially jocks. It also left her pregnant but she is only three months along so she hasn’t told anyone yet.
Code:Notebook
RP Sample (at least 5 sentences): Christina walked into the school, she felt like she was going to be sick. She was scared at that was bothering her so was her stomach. She wasn’t in the mood for this today hell she just wanted to spend another day on her foster mom’s bathroom floor trying not to throw up. She was fifteen, pregnant, in foster care, at a new school, and she didn’t know anyone.
“Well Chrissy” said Christina to herself “Here goes nothing”
She swallowed hard trying to keep down her breakfast. She didn’t want to make a fool of herself on her first day.
just a few tiny points that you can fix easy. In your sample, you kinda didn't use punctuation with quotes. If you need help learning how that works just ask. And your sentence structure is always "She...She..." Which is ok, but if you want your writing to improve, you might want to change it around a bit. Just some suggestions 
Also, if you could get an icon of your model and put it on your profile that would be great. Ask if you need help 
